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Mad-Mady Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Student Filmographer
ehyo! here from le project comments! 
so I've always loved black and white cartoons, it is always very interesting to see what people can achieve with little colour, especially in the relm of story telling and comics! 
to start off with your panel composition is very good. it tells the story, flows well and overall really assists in hi-lighting the things like slipping off the rung and the falling. one of the biggest pet hates of mine are uninspired panel composition or composition that is unflattering to the story. im not going to over flatter you and say "oh my god it was perfect, you nailed it!" because theres always space to improve. but i really think youve got a good keen knack for it and and i enjoyed reading it. (this is comming from a comic enthusiast who is *cough* broke from comic shopping)!
i think as ussual you have anatomy to improve on, if its apart of your style to have wierdly kinda liquid looking characters then thats cool, but this characters breasts looked alittle odd... still nice (not that i was staring too much, but i do love a good pair of boobiesSweating a little... ) overall your anatomy is stylised and i really apreciate that, still some work required on improving that, but then again dont we all Stupid Me! ??? 
i really liked this and i think theres some neat potential here. there were some instances where the colour bled the lines but meh its very minor. 
well done captain! Star! Star! Star! Half Star No Star  stars for you! 
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WhispersBetteNoir Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017
Thanks. I LOVE to use lots of rich colors, so working in black and white is a bit of a challenge. It's a fun challenge though to work with limited palettes. 
I've seen other comics where they have a very simple column-like panel layout, but the comics I referenced had more dynamic ones. I'm always worried about making my panel layout too boring, so I'm glad I'm on the right track.
Well, I do stylize my characters, but I also know I could improve on anatomy. What do you mean by "liquid"? As for the breasts, at least in the panel where she's falling, I was trying to kind of impose gravity on them, since they're bags of fat. Any particular panels/things about them that looked weird.  (Don't we all love a good pair of boobies?)
Thank you so much!
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Mad-Mady Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Student Filmographer
your welcome! tis was a good flick! :happybounce: 
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WhispersBetteNoir Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017
thanks
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Lalluskapalluska Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017  Student General Artist
Graceful as fuck.
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WhispersBetteNoir Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017
Thank
as in Mag handling falling off a roof naked or Feather catching her?
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